Saturday, April 17, 2010

First draft

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Television has quite an impact on young people because more and more TV programs are bombarding people with sex. They will become sexually active. In addition, People also assert that the portrayal of sex promotes promiscuity and undermines moral standards. Another effect is that the mass media has on children. It is a fact that there is too much aggression on TV. Their nature becomes more violent. There are many examples when children created havoc in their schools in shooting accidents. Children could think that they are super heroes and jump from high rise building thus creating a threat for their life. They may become more aggressive and rude in nature. Their health may be spoiled due to watching excessive television. They may concentrate less on their studies its excessive use may decrease their memory retention power. Another problem is that real war is used as a form of entertainment by the media Moreover; newspapers have to use provocative language and striking pictures in order to guarantee high sales. Therefore, mass media affects teenagers by this way, they buy what they see on newspaper, and what is acceptable by society based on the fashion that the media has imposed them. These cause children to behave badly. For example, they buy what they are told to be good for them. Kids who watch more TV start smoking at an earlier age. The relationship between television viewing and age of starting smoking was stronger than that of peer smoking.

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Introduction

Barely hundred years ago, if you wanted to say informed about what was going on the world, we had to rely on word of mouth, at best, newspaper. Because communication technology was very basic, the news we received was days or weeks old. The mass media, especially television and internet, are now the most important source of information. Every day they provide people with pieces of useful and valuable information. But in recent years informative and education programs have given way to immoral and sensational shows. Therefore, the influence of mass media on our kids, teenagers and society becomes widespread.

Television has quite an impact on young people because more and more TV programs are bombarding people with sex. They will become sexually active. People also assert that the portrayal of sex promotes promiscuity and undermines moral standards.

Another effect is that the mass media has on children. It is a fact that there is too much aggression on TV. Their nature becomes more violent. There are many examples when children created havoc in their schools in shooting accidents. Children could think that they are super heroes and jump from high rise building thus creating a threat for their life. They may become more aggressive and rude in nature. Their health may be spoiled due to watching excessive television. They may concentrate less on their studies. Its excessive use may decrease their memory retention power. Another problem is that real war is used as a form of entertainment by the media.

Newspapers have to use provocative language and striking pictures in order to guarantee high sales. Therefore, mass media affects teenagers by this way, they buy what they see on newspaper, and what is acceptable by society based on the fashion that the media has imposed them. These cause children to behave badly. For example, they buy what they are told to be good for them.

Kids who watch more TV start smoking at an earlier age. The relationship between television viewing and age of starting smoking was stronger than that of peer smoking.

Conclusion

To conclude, it is fact that the mass media do not have much beneficial effect on us. They constantly show us scenes full of violence and devastating images of death. But television and the newspaper will always have some adverse effect on us if earning money is media’s sole aim.

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